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 Post subject: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sat Apr 22, 2017 4:34 pm 
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Went to the game today hoping to see frickley win one last game in evo stik premier league we started the game the stronger team hitting the post and had 3 cleared off the line then a sending off changed the game mickleover took control of the game and never looked back 3 good goals to be honest thanks to Doncaster rovers for borrowing us joe pugh and reece fielding both good luck with next season where ever you are playing very sad to see Mr hood walk past me with his head down he gives up his free time doing goalkeeper coach and he does it for free he is totally frickley legend so thanks Jon and I must say thanks to Karl strats dudgeon molly hope you are all there next season for the fight to get frickley back in evo stik premier league I can see some players moving on to other clubs anyway hope you all enjoy your holiday now the footy season is over come back refreshed for the starts of season and the fight which is in front of us I am looking forward to readin dingbat views on everything it's an laugh to read his comments I always agree with his comments


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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 6:06 am 
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DuffyLuffy, a few shorter sentences would make your posts easier to read, but well done for travelling to the match and sticking with Frickley throughout a rotten season. I hope next season is a lot better for you and all The Blues supporters, management and players.


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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 7:48 am 
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Blade who do you think you are forever attempting to correct people's grammar when writing on I pads and phones you just keep writing concentrate on yourself and stop trying to correct others

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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 3:52 pm 
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I know who and what I am and I offer no apologies for defending the language of Byron, Keats and Shakespeare. As I have just signed a publishing contract with a renown London publishing company I have the clout behind my name to do so. In my opinion, all we posters should consider those they wish to read their posts, I am not asking for perfection.
I am offering free advice not criticism, there a major difference, only a fool turns down good free advice. I know it is not easy to post from a phone, I tried it and hated it. I thought what the poster stated was very good but could have been better if it was broken into a few sentences or even if a comma or two were used. I have nothing personal against any Blues' follower, but being a creative writer(much-published) and an editor I naturally see things that I believe could be made far better with just a little care and thought for the reader of the post.
It is my job as an editor to correct people, one of them anyhow, and I usually get paid for editing and advising. You lot are getting it free because of my love for Frickley Athletic Football Club and Blues supporters.
I hope that answers your question Old School.


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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 5:04 pm 
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Should it not be i know whom? Instead of who? Also a few more comma's are needed, just a bit of free advice for you fella

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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 5:05 pm 
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No need for the i before offer either should just be and offer

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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 5:14 pm 
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Should it be there is a major not there a major c'mon man your grammar is appalling editor my a##e

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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 5:23 pm 
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Okay, have your fun, it is really amusing. NOT! I said I did not expect perfection or that my grammar is perfect.


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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 5:26 pm 
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Well stop trying to humiliate others then because that's what you're doing

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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 5:36 pm 
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Blade1 wrote:
Okay, have your fun, it is really amusing. NOT! I said I did not expect perfection or that my grammar is perfect.


So your grammer isn't perfect yet people pay you to check their's?? Hows that work? That's like an electrician that doesn't know what all the wires are on a plug :)

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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 6:22 pm 
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what has blades grandma got to do with all this. :wink:

advice to blade........ it is renowned and not renown. :oops:

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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 7:43 pm 
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Blade1 wrote:
I am offering free advice not criticism, there a major difference, only a fool turns down good free advice.

Verily my good man, might I suggest there is a word missing and - per chance - an incorrrect use of commas in your expostulation (forsooth)?

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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2017 9:00 pm 
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I love reading the Frickley forum!!!!


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 Post subject: Re: Mickleover
PostPosted: Mon Apr 24, 2017 12:36 pm 
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Bladde, your? are; an paine'
That sould keep you happy or maybe not for a while blade.


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